chikashakai

It took place in a proto-type of my Kakuryo but not the same. It was incomplete because: 1. No one was reading it. 2. The characters had jumped the tracks. 3. My writing had improved and I didn't want to be saddled with what I had already done. #1 seems the most critical. If someone had been reading it, I would have continued. Ideas and characters from this story have been recycled.